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The idea of my blood
Running free
No longer in my veins
Brings relief with shame

Even though my blood looks better every moment
Life must go on
Tis the reason
Why I write

This paper holds my pain
Not all, but some
Enough though
Till another day

The words dance across the lines
A ballroom setting for one
For two's pain intermingling
Can cause a tragedy

Sometimes they mock me
Just the same
By fading
Cause the music won't play

My words betrayed me
Thrown into my face
Reminding me of the failure
I have become

The dance should continue
Their feet will bleed
Even if only for a while
At least it is not me

Crimson stains are left on the floor
Lines begin to run
If only it were that easy
If only the paper could bleed for me.
Don't know where this came from, but it fits. :)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student General Artist
It is so magnifacent
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fallrose Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Thank you.
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Faileh Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is very very good. A lot of meaning put behind it. ^-^~ I tend to write things similar to this, like about the pain I'm feeling and stuff. But I don't really write those types of things anymore cause life is finally getting better for me :)
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fallrose Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Thankyou. That is great that you life is finally getting better. :)
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VampireQueenEffeffia Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. That was beautiful.
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fallrose Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
Thankyou. :hug:
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VampireQueenEffeffia Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :D You're a really good poet.
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fallrose Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
:) Thank you. You are really good too.
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